Your stories are great.

…ent conquest, so SHE is treated like a delicate wallflower who thinks only of dresses and marriage. The fact that that which is above is not reflective of that below never occurs to anyone, until we are all forced to become what everyone else chooses to see in us all along.
Guinevere and Vivienne. Part IV
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Mephisto
Annelise Lords
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Apr 11, 2023
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Your stories are great. But the sentences are too long. Cut some stories smaller into chapters. You will attract more readers and earn more too.
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Written by Annelise Lords
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Helping you is Healing me! Let’s heal each other. thisisanneliselords@mediumauthor.com https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/1664635
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